It's time to take another one apart. This time, the written work contains many speech errors, so do not use it as an example. The most interesting thing is that the author of this text is a fairly prepared graduate, and this fact allows us to draw a disappointing conclusion about the quality of speech of an average eleventh grader. But a simple statement will not solve the problem, so let's analyze the shortcomings so that you remember them when writing your own texts. We will consider the errors after the essay, which I publish with minor edits:

“Should I admit my own mistakes? Of course, each person will answer this question differently. In my opinion, if we make mistakes, we must admit their. A person who knows how to admit his mistakes, tries to correct the situation and does not draw conclusions. And if you do not admit your guilt, then a person will not do output 1, and in the future with the same error may occur again.

Let us turn to the story of M.A. Sholokhov. The protagonist of the work, Andrei Sokolov, is a man of honor who went through two wars and survived the terrible torments of captivity. Andrew committed my 2 mistake before going to the front. When relatives saw off the hero, happening 3 unpleasant . Irina Sokolova mourned her husband and said that they would never see each other again, to which Andrey pushes Irina away. He couldn't listen to his wife bury him alive. Deep in his heart, the hero kept the hope that this would not be their last meeting. Pushing yourself away dear person Andrey regrets what he did and cannot forget or forgive himself. He admits his mistake, but, unfortunately, it was no longer possible to correct it. Irina Sokolova and two daughters died during the war. Andrei Sokolov made an irreparable mistake, and he will remember it for the rest of his life

Let us also recall one of the heroes of the novel by A.S. Pushkin. Unlike Andrei Sokolov, Aleksey Shvabrin is a dishonest person, capable of treason and betrayal. He does many irreparable deeds 5 that endanger the lives of others. The most significant mistake in the hero's life is going over to the side of the rebel Pugachev. This act of Shvabrin served as betrayal 6 Motherland and all the inhabitants of the Belogorsk fortress. Aleksey Shvabrin himself does not realize his mistakes, for him to make them is the norm of life. Alexei does not admit his mistakes and, accordingly, does not draw conclusions, and most likely the hero can meet his failures again.

every 8 the mistakes we make, we must answer for ourselves. A person who admits his mistakes deserves more respect than a person who renounces his guilt and does not consider himself guilty.

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Notes:

• A if you do not admit your guilt, then a person will not do pin 1...

Grammar error: will do (whom? what?) conclusion(V.p.), not (whom? what?) output(R.p.)

In general, unjustified repetitions (tautology) are often found in the essay: “ If necessary to acknowledge own mistakes? Of course, each person will answer this question differently. In my opinion, if we make mistakes, we must to acknowledge their. The person who can to acknowledge his mistakes, tries to correct the situation and draws conclusions…”

• Andrew committed my 2 mistake before going to the front.

Pleonasm (use of an extra word): and so it is clear whose mistake Andrei is making.

• When relatives saw off the hero, happening 3 unpleasant conversation for Andrey with his wife Irina 4.

Incorrect use of temporary forms of verbs and word order, leading to ambiguous understanding of the sentence.

Use of the verb going on(inconsistent v., present v.) in the main part of the NGN is inappropriate, since in terms of form and tense this predicate should correlate with the verb saw off(inconsistent time, past time) in the appendage. Right: " When the relatives saw off the hero, an unpleasant conversation took place ... "

Unjustified violation of word order ( an unpleasant conversation for Andrey with his wife Irina) makes it difficult to understand the meaning of the sentence. Right: " an unpleasant conversation for Andrey with his wife Irina”

• He does many irreparable deeds 5

Lexical incompatibility: a mistake may be irreparable, but not an act.

• This act of Shvabrin served as betrayal 6 Motherland and all the inhabitants of the Belogorsk fortress.

Speech error associated with lexical incompatibility. You can not say: "Served betrayal." To correct the error, the sentence must be constructed differently. At least this way: “Shvabrin’s act is a betrayal of the Motherland and ....”

• Summarizing the above, it can be concluded that the every 8 the mistakes we make, we must answer for ourselves.

We open the explanatory dictionary of D.N. Ushakov and read an article about the pronoun k each: 1) Any in a given quantitative series, any of their own kind, recognized as equivalent, and the one, and the other, and the third, etc. Is this meaning implied in the essay? No, here we are not talking about equivalent errors, but about all. So it's correct: Summing up what has been said, we can conclude that for all the mistakes we have made, we must answer ourselves.”

Despite a number of speech shortcomings, the communicative intent of the essay is clear, logic is visible in the work, the graduate's theses are accompanied by evidence from literary works. For all criteria, you can put a "offset".

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Following the path of life is quite difficult to avoid mistakes on it. The whole secret is not how to avoid it, but how to use the experience gained and turn it to your advantage. Just regretting them is just wasting precious time and missing out on the new opportunities that life brings.

Why is it necessary to analyze errors, and not erase them from memory?

Forgetting about a mistake, a person turns the passed stage of life into dust. Makes him lose his value. If you try to translate the reasoning into the plane of examples, then you can imagine, simulate the situation. Someone made a serious mistake and at a certain stage of life went down the path of self-destruction through alcohol or drugs. Having completely destroyed his life and the life of his family, the man found himself on the brink of an abyss. This is an obvious mistake of youth.

Some kind of miracle and the support of loved ones helped him recover and life went uphill. If you forget about what happened and what pain it brought to others, you can again step on the same rake after a while. But if you analyze and draw the right conclusions, you will never return to what it was even if all circumstances incline to this. This is the human mind.

A sober assessment of the mistakes made

The main thing on this path is to evaluate each of your mistakes soberly and draw the right conclusions. an incorrect assessment given to one or another action and an incorrect assessment of subsequent events threaten either to repeat the mistake or to commit new ones. It is impossible to avoid them for the rest of your life. The main thing is that they do not repeat and each of them is unique, and not a relapse of the previous one.

How to achieve a sober assessment of actions

In my opinion, the most sensible approach on this path is to constantly reflect on your actions and completely get rid of the fear of doing wrong. Its presence fetters, limits the scale of actions, making it impossible to make big risky actions, which, sometimes, are simply necessary. Wisdom and experience - that's what mistakes are useful for. Going through them is like hardening a metal plate - it's hot, but it only gets stronger.

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Everyone has made mistakes at least once in their life, but not everyone was amenable to analysis. Probably, each of us at least once thought about what could have happened if we had acted differently? And is it possible to fix something at all, how to prevent them from happening again? Life teaches us lessons, and we only regret that everything happened this way. Time cannot be returned back, and in order for this not to happen, it is sometimes necessary to analyze what is happening.

The environment in which we live, relationships between peers and within the family can serve as an example. Looking at the lives of different people, we either strive for a life similar to theirs, or vice versa, we try to prevent repetition. Without knowing it, we are analyzing the situation, choosing the best option for us. For example, the abuse of alcohol or drugs by acquaintances, seeing their future state, we ourselves choose whether to follow the same path with them or never follow their way of life - this is all also an analysis. Having made a mistake, a person may or may never do it again, or vice versa - choosing the right one for a particular person.

Thus, the analysis helps not to make mistakes again. Do not be afraid of mistakes, because no person exists without them. The main thing is to stop in time, analyze the situation and correct it. With mistakes we become wiser, more experienced.

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Market binary options built in such a way that everyone can get a negative result. What to say about this? This is absolutely normal. Even an investor who has a full baggage of experience can make unsuccessful transactions for himself, but ... It is actually possible to reduce this list of unsuccessful transactions to a minimum.

A successful deal is a deal that builds on experience. This suggests that if a trader trades steadily in options, but does not take into account previous transactions, it is possible to "step on the same rake" as quickly as possible. That is why one of the main (weighty) parts of success is the analysis of the mistakes that were made.

How does error analysis work?

It cannot be explained in scientific terms. The easiest way to discuss this issue is to own example. That is why I personally want to talk about how I once made mistakes, but then I tried to analyze them without fail.

Made a bad deal? In this case, you should return to it and, first of all, find out why it happened after all. Found your mistake? The chance of getting a positive result next time is much higher.

Every trader who grows from a novice to a professional does not understand that his approach to investing changes dramatically in the process (naturally, in a positive direction).

For example: the trading process showed failure in one of the currency pairs. Immediately after the error occurred, its analysis was made. And the whole point of the error lies in the fact that before opening a deal for an option in economic calendar there was news that radically changed the situation as a whole. And what follows from this? It was necessary to simply wait for the news, then understand its effect on the market. This is the reason. Now the investor will know that before opening any deal, first of all, you should look at the economic calendar.

Once I tried to invest in Gazprom shares. Unfortunately for me, the investment was unsuccessful. Why? I relied more on my intuition than any real market indicators. But even in this case, I managed to find my own error. Its essence was that I chose the wrong time to invest. This gave rise to a negative result. After analysis, the "gold mine" was found. After that, I managed to make almost 75% of successful trades in Gazprom shares (yes, I constantly monitor losing / profitable trades in a certain percentage).

The same thing happened with investing in Yandex shares. I'm actually comfortable investing in domestic corporate stocks because they're much easier to study. Why? All financial reports are on the official website, all are written in Russian. It's much more convenient.

Yandex shares have become for me the next stage of a negative / positive result. About 5 transactions I completely “leaked”. Why? It was not possible to find the pattern of investing in a company that became profitable in the future. And only taking into account the constant analysis of their own mistakes, it was possible to achieve a positive result.

If you have a great desire not only to work, but also to earn money in the field of binary options, you should definitely understand that the analysis of all your mistakes is the only way to increase the likelihood of positive transactions in the market.